YOU are what YOU are but..... YOU are not YOURS I am what I am but..... I am not MINE. YOU and I belong to 'HIM' so......please remember WE are 'HIS'. (This post is not only about grammatical item but it is more than that.)
:-) Nice one Venus...and its so easy when we think that way...we still can be You and Me loving Me and You...I'm sure HE will be more happy that way...i think that's the only way to living life truthfully at a ertain moment...
then of course we have our chosen committments -- people who were once or forever kind and loving...how do we ignore them in a moment of selfish love...i feel like crying again..Venus
Nowadays, it doesn't appear like we belong to HIM, it looks like HE belongs to us. See the world around, people are fighting for HIM. And, HE is not fighting for us. So buddy, who belongs to whom? :). Nice to read. TQ
Are we talking about God here?!
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ReplyDeleteNice one Venus...and its so easy when we think that way...we still can be You and Me loving Me and You...I'm sure HE will be more happy that way...i think that's the only way to living life truthfully at a ertain moment...
then of course we have our chosen committments -- people who were once or forever kind and loving...how do we ignore them in a moment of selfish love...i feel like crying again..Venus
wishes!
devika
i just noticed the title...very meaningful, Venus..
ReplyDeleteand Gautami's comment ...i am smiling..just seen her comment at other places as well...
she is so good..but seemingly unkind to me ...
but were i too unkind with her...in a moment of trance i wrote something at her latest blog...and she removed it..sorry if that hurt her...
please mediate for me Venus..i would love to have her as a friend..
wishes!
devika
yes, much more than that -- I really like it!
ReplyDeleteNowadays, it doesn't appear like we belong to HIM, it looks like HE belongs to us. See the world around, people are fighting for HIM. And, HE is not fighting for us. So buddy, who belongs to whom? :). Nice to read. TQ
ReplyDeleteCyclopseven's comment was interesting. Your poem is beautiful and thought provoking. I will meditate on it this evening.
ReplyDeleteExcellent Venus, This reminds me of one of your older poems, "RULES"
ReplyDeleteI tried to post a comment in this post a few days back, but this comments page was not working properly.
Hi everyone, thank you so much.
ReplyDeleteYou got me right, Gautami.:)