Thursday, November 27, 2008

Like a fish........
we swim through
the ocean of life
but then........
only to realize
danger awaits us
from every corner
women.........
fight for your rights.

15 comments:

  1. Ooh, I like this one a lot. I didn't expect it to end that way. :)

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  2. lovely.. :)

    I too expected something else at the end.
    nice twist

    tc, much luv,
    -Aiz.

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  3. deep message. the future is uncertain, bt life is.

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  4. Thank you for visiting my blog, and your nice comment. I am enjoying your blog. Much to think about here.

    Best wishes.

    Renie

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  5. good one-
    your art work is so nice!

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  6. i somehow realted this to d mumbai attacks...yes danger awaits us at every corner

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  7. Hi Venus,

    It's a good one..but it comes from you...
    a bit odd about it -- to me you seem an absolute feminine, not in the least a feminist :)

    anyway, the awareness is good.

    the art -- something odd about the composition; too big a fish for the sea represented, my impression...

    wishes,
    devika

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  8. No, I think it's not too big. It is too big for its water but not too big for the fish.

    Your 9/21 post on soulvenuss made me cry, but I can't comment there. I'll be back.

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  9. your art work is unique and so r ur thoughts



    Alok

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  10. Hi Venus :)

    Excellent poetry with an astonishing end. It is great to note that you are a crusader for women's rights. Wish you all success.

    Have a good day :)

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  11. Hi Venus,
    came checking for new ones, Venus...
    again in mood swing?? swing back dear :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  12. yes...the end was surprising! First, I too thought it was about Mumbai blasts. Lovely!

    The painting is also nice. Liked it!

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  13. Beautiful writing... thanks Venus:))

    Take care

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  14. Hi Venus,

    Nice one. Women should fight for their rights and must be feminine like you. This blend is a must. Too much of anything is good for nothing. Isn't it? :)

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  15. Hi Venus,

    came looking for new ones...
    Hope to see you soon with one :)

    wishes,
    devika

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