Like a fish........ we swim through the ocean of life but then........ only to realize danger awaits us from every corner women......... fight for your rights.
Nice one. Women should fight for their rights and must be feminine like you. This blend is a must. Too much of anything is good for nothing. Isn't it? :)
Like a fish........
Ooh, I like this one a lot. I didn't expect it to end that way. :)
ReplyDeletelovely.. :)
ReplyDeleteI too expected something else at the end.
nice twist
tc, much luv,
-Aiz.
deep message. the future is uncertain, bt life is.
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting my blog, and your nice comment. I am enjoying your blog. Much to think about here.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes.
Renie
good one-
ReplyDeleteyour art work is so nice!
i somehow realted this to d mumbai attacks...yes danger awaits us at every corner
ReplyDeleteHi Venus,
ReplyDeleteIt's a good one..but it comes from you...
a bit odd about it -- to me you seem an absolute feminine, not in the least a feminist :)
anyway, the awareness is good.
the art -- something odd about the composition; too big a fish for the sea represented, my impression...
wishes,
devika
No, I think it's not too big. It is too big for its water but not too big for the fish.
ReplyDeleteYour 9/21 post on soulvenuss made me cry, but I can't comment there. I'll be back.
your art work is unique and so r ur thoughts
ReplyDeleteAlok
Hi Venus :)
ReplyDeleteExcellent poetry with an astonishing end. It is great to note that you are a crusader for women's rights. Wish you all success.
Have a good day :)
Hi Venus,
ReplyDeletecame checking for new ones, Venus...
again in mood swing?? swing back dear :)
wishes,
devika
yes...the end was surprising! First, I too thought it was about Mumbai blasts. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThe painting is also nice. Liked it!
Beautiful writing... thanks Venus:))
ReplyDeleteTake care
Hi Venus,
ReplyDeleteNice one. Women should fight for their rights and must be feminine like you. This blend is a must. Too much of anything is good for nothing. Isn't it? :)
Hi Venus,
ReplyDeletecame looking for new ones...
Hope to see you soon with one :)
wishes,
devika