Sunday, November 23, 2008

In this world......
we are never alone
there is always a crowd around us
in life.......
we are dependent
we need each other
but sometimes....
we just want to be lone.
mood swing.

15 comments:

  1. (hope you don;t mind having a comment :)))

    Give time Venus , the swing will be back to equillibrium :)

    there's a frictional force always working against motion...

    a good one, Venus!

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. We all come to such a point one time or the other.Nice thought venus:) Venus visit my Myviews blog too...

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  3. Loneliness
    begins
    in a crowd.

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  4. You are my new world spokesperson.

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  5. Exactly. As much as we need each other, we need our solitude.

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  6. very human.

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  7. yup.. indeed. but right now i am wishing for a company.



    ammu.

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  8. my situation at the moment..
    beautifully written.

    -Aiz.

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  9. Hi Venus :)

    The crowd around us are strangers. They are not bothered about us. But the people at home are interested in our welfare. Ofcourse, sometimes we want to be alone.

    Good post!

    Have a nice day :)

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  10. Very true. Sometimes to be with others we need to be alone! Beautiful poem. I loved it.

    Also I read a few of your other poems. Liked them. thanks for sharing.

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  11. yes!
    I have a haiga that I will post tomorrow that follows the same path. :)

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  12. Hi Venus!

    Coming to think of it..isn't the mood swing and motion of the mind better than a stable state? :)

    Andrew -- following your path :)

    anyway, take care...some 'followers' had made my life for a while :)

    love,
    devika

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  14. Venus this is very beautifully put. Love the painting too!

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  15. Hi Venus,

    The painting and poem go with each other very much. Good one.

    When we are with people we can learn
    When we are alone we can contemplate
    I think both are important
    and thats why god kept something in us called MOOD...

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