My dearest friend......
my heart goes out to you
and your loved one
so much of sorrow in your eyes
so much of pain in your words
just could not bear
to see you this way
I wish ......
to help but I am helpless
I wish......
to change the present
but I am left without a choice
please be strong
please stand strong
do not give up
do not break down
I am always here
as a shoulder to cry on
together we pray
as one soul and one heart
for the very best.
Hi Venus!
ReplyDeleteThe title says 'There's 'still' HOPE' -- did someone say NO HOPE in between, SCOPE is a different matter altogether though ;-))
now, who is this friend..tell him/her that one shoulder is also available in India's capital city also:-))
Venus, this one soul and one heart -- thinking of it, it will not work with me .. i give it off to the one i sit with..it's never in my hands for a full offering...
and now, i know why i don't have friends who stay by me when in need...but then i assume all are there..don't know God makes me feel that way..
A good poem by you, Venus!
God Bless,
devika
Hi :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by my page
And yeah am doing good..how r u? Been long since i was able 2 drop in any blog page :(
Inspiring buddy. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteHi Venus :)
ReplyDeleteExcellent poem!
You have very clearly spelled out what a friend needs in time of sorrow and suffering. Some times we are just helpless except to console and pray.
Recently the wife of my close friend passed away on account of cancer. There was nothing I could do except to condole and offer my sincere prayers for him to get courage and strength to get over the calamity.
Have a good day :)
Touching
ReplyDeletehello friend :)
ReplyDeletehow ru?? i am fine...
One is always lucky who has friend like you arround....he/she is never going to give up...
Nice one friend
Take Care
Vikas{V}
i wish there were more frenz like u arnd for all of us...
ReplyDeletethat friend of urs is really lucky
very nice poem venusa
ReplyDeleteNow THAT'S a friend. :) What a beautiful, heartfelt poem.
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem.(:
ReplyDeletehow are u?
yes, a very nice one :)
ReplyDeleteExcellent Poem.. very Nice Venus Love it:)
ReplyDeleteTo Ms. Venus
ReplyDeleteYou are heartily welcome to my blogspace. I assure you that my blogs on short stories and paintings, too, would be entertaining you.
I would visit your blog whenever you would post a new post.
Naval Langa
Hi venus,
ReplyDeleteVery nice poem.
When some one cries
we cant wipe out the sorrow
but at least the tears...