Wednesday, April 08, 2009

Unexpected.....
the words came from you

words of yours
pricked my heart like a needle
unexpected...
they came from you
how could have you.....
abused me with your words
I know not the reason why
have you taken me for granted?





8 comments:

  1. Whats this you are saying here, Venus...I can't make out...but I feel sorry,

    If I did that anytime, I am really sorry and seek your pardon...If its someone else, hope he/she realises and get back....my dear, these words are really touching....now its going to be in me.

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. a lot of sadness in this

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  3. is this post d reason for u not bloggin often nowdayz??

    i wish it really isnt...jus tk cr...

    *hugs*

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  4. hi venus,

    exactly my view in a few incidents of my life..
    well said and neatly expressed.

    -Aiz

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  5. Nice poem. I have a poem blog visit
    http://www.poems-of-nature.blogspot.com/

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  6. Something we could all relate to at one time or another in our lives. It happens. It's life.

    Very well written. Thanks for sharing, Venus!

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  7. Sad words, my friend. Blessings upon you.

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  8. Sometimes this happens. i think we should keep in mind that only a ignorant person insults others, to handle this knda of situation.

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