Friday, April 10, 2009

As my heart started to drizzle
tears began to trickle from my eyes
suddenly......
a swirl of mist blurred my vision
coupled with the freezing rain made me shiver.
(Inspiration came while reading 'A Man Named Dave' written by Dave Pelzer)

11 comments:

  1. I know how it is so well, Venus
    short and nice,

    Wish you and family a Holy and Happy Easter, Venus

    love,
    devika

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  2. You know so well the power of words.

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  3. y m i sensin pain in ur words nowdayz?? wat happened??

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  4. sometimes inspiration comes so suddenly ..and it overpowers u..dats wen the most buful poems come out ..this is one

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  5. True emotional flow from ur words friend.
    This words flow when heart is so pure...

    how ru dear??? i am back again :)

    Take Care
    Vikas{v}

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  6. very emotional- I love it.

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  7. What a sad and lonely moment. Well captured, my friend.

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  8. very nice friend.

    how r u dosth?

    -Aiz.

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  9. Very nice poem. I remember a poem that comes in the movie IDHAYAM.
    "idhayathil idi, kankalil mazhai"

    (a thunderbolt hit my heart, so rain in my eyes)

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  10. Very beautiful venus!

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