Saturday, October 04, 2008

Thrilling tears

As my fingers touch your skin
I could feel the smoothness
you are safe and sound
with some layers surrounding you
I have no choice only to remove the layers
as i remove the layers one by one
I could see your shining texture glows
your inner smoothness and shines
obviously visible to my naked eyes
though heavy deep inside
I have to slice your body into pieces
as I slice your body
the strong aroma gets into my nose
my eyes too started to be in tears

tears keep rolling on my cheeks
how thrilling......
slicing an onion.
:))

20 comments:

  1. I've never seen such a thing! :)

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  2. :) Nice to read a poem written in a lighter vein...Good one.

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  3. you have some lovely poem on your site!!! thanks for your visit!

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  4. I thought it was about a passionate love affair, but okay, an onion will work, too. ;)

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  5. As carlet says i thought of passionate love affair but atlast onion :)Nice to read a poem .

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  6. Hi CU, how are you? You had a good laugh. I am glad.Take care.:)

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  7. Hi Andrew, it just came into my mind.:)

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  8. Thank you for your kind words shri. :) Maybe will write about garlic too.:))

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  9. Hi shadow, welcome. Thank you for your visit. Do come again. :)

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  10. Hi scarlet, just a little suspense. :)

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  11. Hi cyclop, please don't cry. I will cry too.:)) Take care my friend.

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  12. Hi jaishree, thank you for your visit. It's so kind of you. God Bless.

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  13. hey venus,
    nice one la...
    out of all the poems ,u found an onoin to talk about... really good hahaha
    have a nice day.

    dev

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  14. Hi Dev, thank you. Maybe will write about ginger soon.:))

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  15. Hi Radha, welcome. Nice to see you here. Thank you. I loved everything at your blog. Take care.

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  16. There you made me lol!

    Good work, Venus..humour at the core of all erotica...its an interesting aspect of you...

    i should say: see more of you :-)
    devika

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  17. Hi devika, glad that I made you laugh. What is life without humour?:)) Take care.

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