Monday, October 06, 2008

Mind travels

In the dark
lying on the bed

with my arm on my forehead
staring at the ceiling
pampering my thoughts of you
you.........The Past.

12 comments:

  1. i remember the days of doing this, staring at the ceiling. revealed many lives to me. :)

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  2. The past is better remembered in the dark...with an arm on the forehead and staring up at the ceiling. I've done this many times.

    Great poem!!

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  3. walking down the memory lane..
    sometimes tears, and some other times smiles..

    lovely

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  4. Past is better to be stared during the dark nights.It won't reveal itself during the day, only in dark it reveals itself :)

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  5. Hi shri, thank you so much. Tc.

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  6. GP, mean to say you don't do it nowadays?:))

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  7. Thank you scarlet. This is what always happen to me.

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  8. Princess, very true. Thank you.

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  9. Yes cyclop, you can say that.:)

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  10. The past sometimes meltdown to a 'you'...I mean to me! ;-)

    Nice one!

    getting back Venus to you soon
    wishes!
    devika

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  11. Thank you devika. Always loved to read your responds.:)

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