Friday, October 10, 2008

Allow me

My dear one........
how I wished
I could read your mind
how I wished
I knew what was in your mind
my dear one........

please allow me
to swim through your mind
and merge with your thoughts

to enlighten you
to help clear your clouded mind
and make you feel a lot more better
my dear one........
if not today or tomorrow
maybe one fine day
do allow me
to merge with your thoughts.

16 comments:

  1. **do allow me
    to merge with your thoughts.

    ahhh that was such a beautiful line...u said everythin in so few words!!

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  2. Usually your poems are that of a seeker. But this one is of a teacher. A very good teacher. Beautiful.

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  3. Everyone needs someone like this at some time.

    Very well written.

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  4. i really like d posts on this blog...u r blogrolled :)

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  5. One day all the thoughts will merge together. This is not a fiction but the essence of reality.

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  6. Nice..everyone feels this way some time or the other about dear ones...that's human nature..we care so much.

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  7. Mayz, thank you so much. You blogrolled me! Thank you so much.:)

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  8. Thank you shri. Hope you are doing fine there.

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  9. Yes scarlet, perhaps you are right. Thank you.

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  10. Cyclop, I am just waiting for that one day. I fully hope. Thank you.

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  11. Hi akshaya, thank you for your kind words. Glad to see you here. Thank you for dropping by. Take care.

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  12. hullo dear i m fine n i shall b back soon to b amongst u all.

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  13. Thank you so much, Radha.

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  14. Glad that you are fine. Thank you for your visit, jyotsana.

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  15. I relate...
    and my world of dear ones is becoming larger...

    Wishes!
    devika

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