Friday, October 26, 2007

Lost....

In the journey of your life
you are......but a refugee
running away from reality

drown in your own cruelty

at the end......
regretting your own insensibility.

32 comments:

  1. hi,

    I guess not all are like that..

    may be to some extent..

    -Aiz.

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  2. Yes, u r right. Thank you.:)

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  3. lovely & very true thoughts...you have crafted it beautifully. Its so relevant in todays world & we all face these insecurities...nice lines!

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  4. Well said Mary and for a lot very true.

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  5. Hmm..donno what makes you say that..surely something which makes you look at the cruelty portion of it,..sometimes once you pour it out and get rid of it ,the nice things will surface which have been hidden fathoms deep in our heart..nice words venus..good luck
    tc
    cu

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  6. in the end, LIFE it is :)

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  7. Kalyan, thank you so much. I love visiting your blog. Pictures are very colourful. Very informative too.

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  8. Yes, very true Janice.:)

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  9. CU, you are right. Thank you.

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  10. Thank you dj. Do you think the world is coming to the end?

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  11. i don't think there are any ends, only new beginnings... :)
    tc...

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  12. true but not all :)

    Take Care
    Vikas{V}

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  13. Yes, you are right. Thank you vikas. Take care 2.

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  14. it reflects me well :|


    ammu.

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  15. we all are refugees. running away from an unknown reality, in search of a hopeful 'reality' to give us full hope. Life is meaningless run without this marathon, buddy.

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  16. Hi ammu, thank you. How are you? :)

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  17. Thank you cyclop. You said it right. Take care my friend.

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  18. Sometimes the words match, but sense doesnt; and at other times it all rhymes, but conveys little.

    But u write so brilliantly well, Venus.. I am awed!

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  19. Hi mm, thank you so much. I truly appreciate your words. Still learning.:)

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  20. True but not applicable for every1 i guess :) Nice words and well expressed!

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  21. how r u??
    hope u r doing good...
    tc...

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  22. It is powerful ... It is dark and it is reflective ...

    on a very personal level, I don't hesitate to look at what is dark for it always paves a way that is better than wht led us to tht dark ...

    Amazing write

    Alok

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  23. Yes, Andrew. You are right. Thank you.

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  24. Thank you ponn.:) Tc

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  25. Thank you dj. I am fine. Hope you too.:)

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  26. Hi alok, nice to see you here after a long break. Hope you are doing just fine. Thank you for the nice words. Take care.

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  27. KS, thank you for your visit and smile.

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