Sunday, November 18, 2007

Silence.........

Silence of you my dear friend
I felt so much nowadays
though I know the reasons
I just couldn't help it
for the thought of you
keep coming into my mind
missed you my friend.

31 comments:

  1. You're back!! :)
    Good to see your work again -- this one is wonderful.

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  2. Thank you Andrew.:)

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  3. You care for ur frnds so much Venus ... I loved what you did here .. congratulations

    Alok

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  4. looks like a post written for me! seriously, that's exactly how i feel right now.
    :(


    ammu.

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  5. Wow...!!!
    This is simple poetic genius...
    Lovely !!
    And thanx for dropping by..

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  6. nice....there is a poem which ends with the words silence silences i forgot who or what it was...

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  7. beautiful words...
    keep writing
    tc...

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  8. Seems like we have all been touched... amd lost within...
    beautifully expressed despite the painfulness. Thank you!

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  9. Yes, I do alok. Thank you so much.

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  10. Hi ammu,hope you feeling better now. Wrote the poem when I was feeling very down. Thank you.

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  11. Hi cinderela, how are you? Nice to have you here after such a long break. Thank you so much for your words. Tc.

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  13. Thank you vishesh. I am not sure either. Take care.

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  14. Hi katie, how are you? It's nice to have you here. Thank you so much for your kind words. Take care.

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  15. lovely...this was so nice to read & your interpretation of this word is wonderful & thougtful!

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  16. Thank you so much kalyan. Take care.

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  17. Hi dj, thank you so much. Take care.

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  18. Hi Mary...what a wonderfully wistful poem. Love your use of the acrostic too.

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  19. Thank you Janice. Glad that you like it. :) Take care.

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  20. Hi CU, thank you so much. Nice to have you here.:)

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  21. Wow!
    Supremely Crafted, my pal!
    :)

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  22. MM how are you? Thank you. Take care.

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  23. Silence is golden. For gold (friendship) to shine at times it has to remain silent, undergoing the polishing process. It is just another language my friend. A language many fail to understand. If we can understand this language, we all shall be talking to God, instead of praying :). good one buddy.

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  24. Hi cyclop, hope you are doing just fine. I understand exactly what you are trying to say my dear fren but sometimes it's just too difficult to take it. Thank you so much my fren. I know you are always there.:)Take care. Lots of love.

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  25. Hi GW, thank you so much for your kind words. Take care.

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  26. Hope and love, thank you so much.:) Take acre.

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  27. Hi Venus

    Fist time I visited your blog, this is what I am feeling right now, after a breakup with my dear friend

    Well written
    Anurekha

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  28. Hi anu, thank you so much for your visit. I know it is very painful. Hope things will get better.Take care.

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