Sunday, September 06, 2009

Carry On Tuesday
The words in blue are taken from the first lines of an Anonymous poem.

My dear one.....
I have so much to say
whenever I call
my dear one.....
I have so much to say
whenever you call
but.....
I don't speak
because.....
words will only steal the moment
we had shared all these years
and.....
I have to believe.....
silence speaks louder than words.

13 comments:

  1. OH this is lovely. I think about how much we miss when we don't take the time to listen. Very nice.

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  2. Oh so sweet, Venus :)

    the verse and you,

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. I just can't agree more with you...some moments are just to be felt and not spoken....indeed silence is louder than words!

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  4. Hi venus....nice poem...agree wit this 'silence speaks louder than words

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  5. yes, it happens in understanding! so nice dear :)

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  6. I don't speak
    because.....
    words will only steal the moment
    These lines fascinated me.Nice poem

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  7. it's lovely.. but it's making me rather sad

    :(

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  8. Silence speaks with thunderous impact. Well written.

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  9. Very nice, you've done a good job of incorporating the words and making them your own.

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  10. We underestimate silence. Sometimes it's voice is so powerful and you've shown that with this beautiful poem.

    PS - Check your e-mail; I'll be writing soon! :)

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  11. yes it does. you have the acknowledgment from me now. !

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  12. Well said Mary - humans often ramble on about the most inconsequential stuff.

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  13. lovely, and yeah ur inviting hibiscus is stunning to the eyes. :D

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