Wednesday, January 28, 2009

It pricks like a thorn
where are you?
the continuous pain
one indulges in
do you see?
it pricks like a thorn
where are you?
do you exist?
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8 comments:

  1. Devika Jyothi5:28 PM

    I am just there Venus :)

    But, seems you are seeking someone else; do I prick like thorn?? :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Alok7:42 PM

    very powerful venus ....

    Alok

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  3. Granny Annie8:31 PM

    Glad to see you back my friend. We need our brains jump started occasionally.

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  4. NAVAL LANGA10:25 PM

    Ms. Venus

    You talk about the thorns, but your poem is nice like a flower !

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  5. Manivannan Sadasivam12:15 AM

    Deeply touching Venus! Hope your fine there. take care!

    :)This is for the comment above.

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  6. gautami tripathy7:31 PM

    Yes, he exists. In your mind. And heart.

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  7. ramesh sadasivam3:56 PM

    I think the comment by gautami tirupathy is most appropriate. :)

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  8. Janice Thomson8:03 AM

    Guatami has indeed said it well.

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