Sunday, December 07, 2008

Abandon child

Child.....
may speak thousands of words
interpretations may differ
at times may deceives too
thousands of mysteries hidden behind
innocent child.....
glows brightness warmth without flame
sparkles excitement with flashes of light
utters thousands of words coated with love
innocent child.....
glooms in the darkness cold with flame
yearns the tender feelings of affection
longs for peace, love and unity
child.....
there is still a life
there is still a hope.
( Posted elsewhere before)

7 comments:

  1. wow
    very nice poem.i love the way you express the thoughts of a child.each word you us is smply beautiful.
    keep posting ...........

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  2. Hi Venus,

    To a 'child' who can say a thousand words you say "there is still a life
    there is still a hope."

    won't that be confusing the little one, Venus??


    wishes,
    devika

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  3. i like d way u express d feelings in all ur posts...d intensity of words n d meanin behind em is simply beautiful

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  4. yes, there's always hope. nice work!

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  5. Wonderful poem!liked a lot!!

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  6. beautiful! Love the ending lines

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  7. Nice poem venus. Every child is special. We humans have a long way to go.

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