Thursday, March 27, 2008

You......the E...

You are too precious
without you........
darkness is everywhere
without you.......
day and night
seems to be the same
without you.......
black is the only colour
without you........
is there light beyond the darkness?
you.........the EYES
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20 comments:

  1. Vishesh10:36 PM

    beautiful...nice flow,petite and profound..

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  2. Alok7:55 PM

    Yes indeed beautiful ... and profound


    Alok

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  3. Ever Hopeful11:36 PM

    Hi Mary

    Very true, whether one has beuatiful eyes or not doesn't matter. What matters is eyes with sight.

    Beautiful peom

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  4. Janice Thomson11:40 PM

    Thought-provoking Mary - I'm really enjoying your poetry lately!

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  5. Sam!!3:17 AM

    Beautiful!!

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  6. Unknown7:14 PM

    thanks for visiting my blog....

    nice pictures you have in the other blog...

    keep blogging..

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  7. venuss664:10 PM

    Hi vishesh, been a long time. Thank you so much. How are you?

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  8. venuss664:11 PM

    Thank you alok.:)Take care.

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  9. venuss664:12 PM

    Hi anu,I agree with you. Thank you for your kind words. Hope you are doing fine. Take care.

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  10. venuss664:13 PM

    Hi Janice, it means so much coming from you. Thank you so much. God Bless.

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  11. venuss664:14 PM

    Thank you samrina. Nice to have you here. Take care.

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  12. venuss664:15 PM

    Hi vatsal, thank you for coming by. I admire most of your paintings. Keep it up. Take care.

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  13. Life9:45 PM

    without you my life is dead......

    true love.......

    Take Care
    vIkAs{V}

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  14. Princess5:14 PM

    everything is incomplete without you.. :D

    nice poem
    -Aiz.

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  15. venuss669:10 PM

    Hi vikas, very true. Thank you for coming by. I am fine. Thank you. Hope you too. Take care.

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  16. venuss669:18 PM

    Hi princess, you are right. Thank you for your visit. Take care.

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  17. tulipspeaks12:24 PM

    lovely!


    ammu.

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  18. Jyoti8:10 PM

    Great!

    Eyes are something which make our life "alive"..else we wont be able to cherish life so well.

    Nice words :)

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  19. Unknown5:37 PM

    !! ...my blog is back on!...
    with a bang..
    drop by to see "uff!"

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  20. venuss665:40 PM

    Hi ammu, thank you so much.

    Jyoti, how are you? Thank you for your visit.

    Hi vatsal, will visit soon.

    Take care.

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