What shall I say?
to wish you only the best
you deserve it
you have always been a mystery
since the moment I saw you
since the moment I got to know you
that's what made you so special
that unique reserve smile of yours
it's very intriguing
what shall I say?
don't ever lose it
don't ever change it
a piece of advice
control your destiny
never lose your individualism
never lose your independence
once you lose it
once you let another controls it
once you let another dictates it
you lose your self respect
what shall I say?
hold on to it tightly
you.....my conscience.
surprising end.. :)
ReplyDeleteammu.
oh I love how you ended this! Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteLife is full of surprises, my dear. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteHi Andrew, thank you so much for your lovely words. Take care.
ReplyDeleteExcellent Mary - the ending superb :)
ReplyDeletewonderful !! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteHi Janice, thank you so much. How are you?
ReplyDeleteHi Katie, thank you for coming by. Hope you are doing pretty good. Bye.
ReplyDeletelovely words....this is just so realistic and we can really understand it, when we feel this similar thing...its so much more important to really know what we are doing, even though circumstances may be trying ones...if we believe in ourselves and are alert, I think we can better manage our conscience....wonderful lines!
ReplyDeleteI agree with others ... fantastic ending .... well done
ReplyDeleteAlok
Wonderful!!
ReplyDeleteGod bless you!
hi venus,
ReplyDeleteso very nice...
:)
Hi Venus
ReplyDeleteI was also going to write something on my conscience, but in prose of-course,as I am not a peot. Wait for it, you will see something like this in the month of April.
Yours is well written, I love the way you express so much with just few words
Best wishes
Hi kalyan, thank you so much for your most kind words. How have you been? Pretty busy i suppose.Take care.
ReplyDeleteSamrina, thank you again. God Bless you too.
ReplyDeleteHi princess, thank you so much. How are you? Hope to hear from you. Take care.
ReplyDeleteHi anu, I am eagerly waiting to read yours. Thank you so much for coming by. Much appreciated. Take good care. God Bless.
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