Thursday, May 29, 2008

It bleeds

............when a stranger
throws words on your face
it's still acceptable
couldn't careless
but.............when a friend
throws words on your face
it's terrible
it's humilating
it's embarrasing
tears keep rolling
heart keeps sinking
it starts bleeding
it's very hurting.

6 comments:

  1. Oh gosh hope this didn't happen to you personally Mary. Very powerful poem.

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  2. So very true Mary.

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  3. U have depicted the feeling perfectly


    Alok

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  4. really,someone closes's words r more hurtin n unbearable...

    nice work

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  5. my..my..what happened buddy? Hope it wasn't me :))

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  6. Yeah, sometimes things just happened the other way round. Human can never be pleased and understood. Thank you for all those kind words. Bye.

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