You have become selfish
when.......
your heart refused to
reveal your feelings for me
your fingers refused to
scribble your love for me
your hearing refused to
listen to my voices
your mind refused to
think of me
your senses refused to
crave for my love
and....today.....true
you have become selfish.
this is very powerful!
ReplyDeletelet this selfishness elope in moments to reveal & feel the true love that is so rare yet so eternal.....lovely words....beautifully crafted lines!
ReplyDeleteHi venus
ReplyDeleteI relate to you in these ways
age is same
profession is same
gender is same
above all
Feelings are same.
I have gone through something hat you wrote in your poem "Selfish"
I like to read your compostions, but, iam not as good as you in expressing myself.
Keep writing
Anu
great..!!
ReplyDeleteHi Andrew, thank you so much. Thank you for your visit. God Bless.
ReplyDeleteHi Kalyan, how are you? Thank you for your kind words. Take care. God Bless.
ReplyDeleteHi anu, welcome. Thank you for your visit and kind words. A friend who is going through a breakup inspired me to write this poem. Wish to read your posting but could not. Could not access to your blog. Hope to hear from you. Take care. God Bless.
ReplyDeleteHi doc, thank you for visiting. How are you? How is work? Take care. God Bless.
ReplyDeleteVery powerful is right! I could feel this so deep within.. and irt described my break up so very well! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteHi Venus
ReplyDeleteWhen I read this poem, I was myself going thorugh a break-up, so the peom came at the right time for me also, but, I don't know why I am still hopeful that the person may come back, please pray for me. He was a special freind to me.Iam yet to start my blog
Will let you know when I start.
Regards
Anu
Hi Katie, nice to have you here. I know many will relate to this. Hope you are doing good. Take care. God Bless.
ReplyDeleteHi anu, do not worry much. If he is meant for you, he will come back to you. We pray for the best. Take care. God Bless.
ReplyDeletevery true indeed!
ReplyDeleteammu.
Happy Valentine's Day. I felt like that once. And V Day was round the corner. :-) Like now.
ReplyDeletehi venus...such a beautiful post! lovely words...hapy v-day!
ReplyDeleteThat really hits the mark Mary. Powerful and excellently written.
ReplyDeleteGlad to be back in blogland again. :)
yes I agree with Andrew ... It is very powerful .. and this is wht I miss when u dont write
ReplyDeleteAlok
lovely words .........
ReplyDeleteselfishness may take over due to moments ..isnt it
Take Care
Vikas{V}
profound!
ReplyDeleteKeshi.
Hey saw ur msg ... my email id is alok.jha28@gmail.com. Drop me a line anytime. thanks
ReplyDeleteAlok
Thank you all for your kind words. God Bless.
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