Sunday, October 05, 2008

In the dark

What is wrong with me, my friend?
sometimes..........
I feel very low
I feel so lonely
though I am not alone
I feel something is missing
though I feel I have everything
What is wrong with me, my friend?
sometimes..........
I could feel the distance
like you are moving away
though I know, you are there
I feel that you just do not care
though I know you care
What is wrong with me, my friend?
when the thought of you
come into my mind
I feel very heavy deep inside
my heart starts to drizzle
my eyes full of tears
it is so painful
What is wrong with me, my friend?
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12 comments:

  1. Scarlet6:44 AM

    Having doubts is part of being human. I think we can all relate to this.

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  2. Devika Jyothi12:51 PM

    Hi Venus!

    The same questions I sometimes keep asking me..and to relieve myself..I laugh at myself saying nothing is wrong with you..'You are the wrong'

    then a bit bitterly I ask the Lord, Why did you create me so, Oh my??'

    He smiles back..'To correct you, dear'

    then its just lol!

    take things lightly Venus..we all have these doubts as Scarlet
    said...

    You have put across that feeling nicely, i should say..
    loved reading you (or me?, here) again,
    will come again..
    devika

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  3. Cinderella1:32 PM

    This is a normal human tendency isnt it ?

    :)



    p.s : You always take pix in the same pose or wt ?

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  4. tulipspeaks3:28 PM

    nothing wrong with you.
    you are just being normal.

    hugs!



    ammu.

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  5. cyclopseven5:10 PM

    To entertain these kinda feelings, reflects the true nature of human relationship. Mind can be very deceiving. Think the other way round buddy..perhaps your friend is busy with job or some family responsibilities etc. Possible right? Your fren too is just another ordinary human being :)

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  6. Princess5:29 PM

    hi venus,

    //"my heart starts to drizzle
    my eyes full of tears"//

    I loved those lines..
    its really painful

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  7. venuss666:13 PM

    Hi scarlet, you are right. Thank you.

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  8. venuss666:16 PM

    Your kind words are much appreciated, devika. Thank you so much. Take care. God Bless.

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  9. venuss666:19 PM

    Yes, normal tendency, Cindy. Thank you.

    p.s : You always take pix in the same pose or wt ?

    LOL. May be you are right. I should try diff pose. :))

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  10. venuss666:20 PM

    Hi ammu, how are you? Thank you.
    Take care dearie.

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  11. venuss666:23 PM

    So sorry cyclop. Yes, possible.
    Thank you my dear fren.

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  12. venuss666:24 PM

    Thank you princess. Yes, very painful. Take care.

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